Sounds good to hear your voice again!I know it's a rough copy and all but it did seem a tad dry, maybe because you are renadig the manuscript word-for-word rather than retelling the same story. When you were reciting the part about the ducks , I didn't feel the anger in your voice that was obviously felt at the moment that it occurred. Not that I would want you to relive these horrible moments.. but it seemed a little detached as you were renadig it.It's great.. don't get me wrong.. I am one of your fans hehe.. but I thought I would get in some honest and constructive feedback for you now while you are still in the recording process.